Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious problems, as well as practical problems. To what extend do you agree or disgree with this statement?

Nowadays ,migration from one
country
to another has become increasingly popular.It has been argued that moving to a foreign
country
and having to speak a foreign language ,can lead to
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detrimental consequences.
This
essay will argue that being placed in a foreign
country
,and talking in a non-native language can cause some problems
such
as being misunderstood and breaking that
country
's laws. One of the major drawbacks of being a foreigner
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is being non completely understood .
This
actually can happen even if the pronunciation is clear and the person is fluent,and that's because one can say something that seems completely innocent to him,only to turn up to be inappropriate in that
country
's culture.
For example
, in some
country
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it is considered fine to ask someone how much he gets paid,but in the united kingdom ,
for instance
,it can make people feel uncomfortable ,
moreover
,it can be taken as rudeness.
thus
,different languages can be an obstacle and can lead to huge problems. Another issue that can face those people is that sometimes
unintentianally
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they can break the
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.That's because what might seems a normal cultural
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for them,is considered against the law in that particular
country
.
for instance
,in Sweden physical punishment for children is considered a crime ,and leads to children being taken by the government .obviously ,physical punishment is a way of discipline
that is
adopted by many people and can end with them breaking the low and losing their child.
Therefore
, severe consequences can result from migration to a non-native
country
. In
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living in
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country
can result in many problems.
This
essay argued that among these issues miscommunication ,and not being familiar with that
country
's laws can be serious and leads to severe consequences.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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