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In some countires, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

#countires #people #history #house #research
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There is a tendency that
people
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 are more interested in the
history
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 of the
buildings
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 where they live and
this
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 interest has significant reasons to occur. The following essay will try to find out what are those and the way how individuals can research their house's
history
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 of all, why are
people
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 even
curies
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 about it? Since the 21st century started, governments all around the world, have been trying to preserve old
buildings
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.
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, for most of the past century houses were filled with
people
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,
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 making them concerned about their condition. Some of the houses have not been maintained for years, so
people
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 may experience some domestic issues,
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 as water pouring from a rooftop and more.
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, these old
buildings
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 might be placed in those streets that have not been noisy and crowdy until nowadays, and the
people
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 are likely to find out what are those architectural and planning issues that caused
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 problems and it all leads to
buildings
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history
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 where they can be found.
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, it needs to be found out how and what certain individuals should look at their house
history
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. Maybe to most ,
people
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 the best of research would become the internet. It will allow us to search for information and find those events that happened in past, that led to the current situation. Actually, the internet is able to contact anyone who used to live old house and it can provide researchers with useful information and they will not lose a considerable amount of time. Overall, it can be seen what made
people
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 get interested in the
history
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 of their own houses and there are many ways to find out it.
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