Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving a car or motorbike. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There has been much discussion revolving around the issue of whether the government should enhance road safety by increasing the legal

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for driving cars or any other autos. In

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essay, I will discuss both views and give my opinion. The primary factor we need to take into consideration is that every year gives a big amount of knowledge to every human and they are becoming wiser and smarter. Whether authorities would increase the minimum legal

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for driving, that definitely would lead to much

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accidents on the roads.

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, that may save some young souls from thoughtless actions and save them from dangerous situations.

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, teenagers at 16 years old in the USA or students

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18-25 in Europe are very likely to go to parties and drink alcohol.

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, these humans, after the party, somehow have to go home or to any other destination by themselves, but if they have a

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, they may drive home with that auto.

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thoughtless action may lead to an enormous situation like an accident on the road or even worse.

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people don’t assert that it is really needed to increase the legal

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for driving a

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a person at 16 years old as at 25 might be able to do it very carefully and by the rules.

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, if one human could feel adult and ready for driving a

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at 16 years old,

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another human being won’t be able to do it even at the

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of 30, because of his fears or any other factor that ceases him.

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means that even if the government would change the minimum legal

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for driving, it doesn’t mean that it definitely would help to reduce

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accidents on the roads and increase safety, because

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teenagers, as adults might get into an accident even if they were careful or had a great driving experience. Having considered both views,

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would assert that increasing the minimum

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for driving isn’t very essential,

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it may save

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life by protecting them from some spontaneous and stupid decisions while young.