Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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to their
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condition
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. Many
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argue that it is good when
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accept their bad
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like having uncomfortable work or having
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little
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money, while
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others claim that they must improve their
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to get a better
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accepting a poor
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will make them
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be more patient and grateful, I believe that
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thing must be changed so they can enjoy their entire
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. On the one hand, accepting an unsatisfied situation gives an experience
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people
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how to be more patient and grateful
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their
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, which can make them
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be a better
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. In spite of their
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, they will always feel that they have enough resources so they will not need
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help from
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others.
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, some of
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in the factory in Indonesia get a lower income.
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, they always think that
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is
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more than enough
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their needs. As the result, their willingness to work is still so high, which is good for them.
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,
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poor
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must be improved so they can get a better quality of
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, by improving
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conditions,
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be more motivated to enjoy their
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, which affects
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their happiness. They will have some resources to solve their problems so that they can alleviate the impact of the problems they are faced. Take
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in Findland to illustrate. They have
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infertile land because of the climate, a
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GDP, a small number of
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citizens
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, and so on.
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, they never give up
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this
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fate.
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, the economic growth in that country always increases every year, while the quality of the
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is one of the best in the world. To sum up,
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maybe accept their bad
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in
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way because they can learn from
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situation and be a good person in the future.
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, they must try their best to change their fate so they can experience a good
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adversity
  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
  • confront
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