You recently went on holiday and your friend let you a travel guidebook. Write a letter to friend in your letter. Tell your friend about that book Explain how the guidebook was helpful Say when and how you will return the guidebook.

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I’m writing

this

letter to let you know that I went on

vacations

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few

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days ago with my family and your

guide

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guidebook

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book

was imaging. Actually, I went on

holidays

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to Delhi. We visited Red fort, Taj Mehal, India gate and many other nearby places. It was one

week

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trip which provided all of us

mental

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satisfaction. As you know I visited Taj Mehal for the

first

time in my life and I was on cloud nine after watching it. We were there by train and booked

e-rikshaw

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for seaming purposes. I assure you that it is one of the best places to let one’s has down. You provided me tourist guidebook which helped me a lot. With

the

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help of it, I booked my train tickets in advance to the nearest station

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tourist places.

This

book

really worked as a killing two birds with one stone, it

is only provides

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me with exact locations but adds

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to my knowledge. At the same

time

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this

book

is very handy which made

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my journey memorable. I return

you

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this

book

by the

weekend so that you can start your project on ‘TOURIST ATTRACTIONS’.

It the

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week, I’ve

schedule

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my meeting.

Mr.

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Akhil and after

that

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I’ll visit

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your home and I’ll

also

show you the awesome pictures of

trip

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. See you soon. Kirandeep Kaur

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

229 words

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You recently went on holiday and your friend let you a travel guidebook. Write a letter to friend in your letter. Tell your friend about that book Explain how the guidebook was helpful Say when and how you will return the guidebook.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

You work for an international company and you need some time off to attend a family celebration. Write a letter to the company’s manager. In your letter: give details of the celebration explain the reason why you need time off suggest a way to have your work done during that time.

In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

Many students now work whilst they are studying in college or university. This often results in them having less time to concentrate on their as well as feeling under pressure. what are some of the causes of this? what solutions could you suggest?