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In many countries today, crimes novels and TV crimes dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV show are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

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Nowadays, in the vast majority of
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countries, novels and TV dramas about crimes are becoming more famous. In my opinion,
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books
 and TV series about
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detective
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 genre attract more
people
 to purchase
the
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books
 about
crime
 or to watch every series breathtakingly to know who the
murder
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 is. On the one hand, the materials in
thriller
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 genre,
for example
,
books
, TV series and short novels have been an interesting topic for
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people
 over the years and gaining popularity every new day. It is due to the fact that
this
 keeps
people
 more excited about what will happen and the
books
 and movies about
crime
 easily become bestsellers and blockbusters,
accordingly
.
Thus
, every year millions of dollars spend in
this
 industry to create fascinating works.
Secondly
, I reckon that watching and reading about
crime
 and
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 increases the ability of cognitive thinking in
the
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people
;
therefore
, they could solve any problem within minutes or see the actions that happen beyond our conscious control.
Moreover
, the film "Seven" is
also
 one of the greatest movies in
this
 genre and with the help of the two detectives in
this
 movie, everyone can pursue the
further
 steps of the criminal and find the murderer in an easy way. To sum up, dramas and
noves
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novels
 about
crime
 are gaining popularity and these have significant impacts on the
people
 who are passionate about every detail
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 the crimes and learn how the criminal offended the
crime
.
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