You had a birthday party and you were playing loud music. Your neighbour complained. Write a letter of apology explaining that it was a special occasion and that it won't happen again.

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Dear Dean Family, I would like to apologise for the
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caused on Friday night, It was my 40th birthday and I had a lot of friends and family members that visited to celebrate
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milestone with me. We got drunk unfortunately we got influenced by alcohol
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we could not realise that the
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was really out of control. I only noticed that the
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was so bad when the police came to knock at our door and explain that the whole neighbourhood was complaining about the
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. I assure you ,
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incident will never happen again, and I hope we will continue to live in harmony as neighbours. Yours sincerely,
Tsungai
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Tsunami
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