You had a birthday party and you were playing loud music. Your neighbour complained. Write a letter of apology explaining that it was a special occasion and that it won't happen again.

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Dear Dean Family, I would like to apologise for the

noise

that

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caused on Friday night, It was my 40th birthday and I had a lot of friends and family members that visited to celebrate

this

milestone with me. We got drunk unfortunately we got influenced by alcohol

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we could not realise that the

noise

was really out of control. I only noticed that the

noise

was so bad when the police came to knock at our door and explain that the whole neighbourhood was complaining about the

noise

. I assure you ,

this

incident will never happen again, and I hope we will continue to live in harmony as neighbours. Yours sincerely,

Tsungai

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Tsunami

Sungai

Submitted by tsungaimukozho on Tue Oct 18 2022

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5 paragraphs

116 words

4.50

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You had a birthday party and you were playing loud music. Your neighbour complained. Write a letter of apology explaining that it was a special occasion and that it won't happen again.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Environmental damage is a problem in most countries… What is the cause of this damage? What should be done about this problem?

Some people say that the main aim of advertising is to improve the sales of products that people do not really need. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The best way to reduce poverty in developing countries is by giving up to six years of free education, so that they can at least read, write and use numbers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding changes. Others, however, think that change is always good. Discuss both these views and give your own opinions.