Many people go through life doing work that they hate or have no talents for. Why does this happen? What are the consequences of this situation?

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Nowadays, many
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go for jobs they have no skills
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of educational services or job opportunities. Below I will be giving some reasons and consequences while starting examples.
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, work is an activity that involves both physical and mental effort in order to achieve goals.
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,
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look down on certain jobs
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as farming, construction, selling in a supermarket, being
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bus
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and many others. Everyone wants to go for something big
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as being a doctor, accountant,
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and so on leaving very important things unattended.
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, imagine a country where everyone wants to be a minister,
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will die of hunger due to lack of food,
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without private vehicles will not be able to explore their hometown due to lack of public vehicles. A believe that
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if every job is seen as important as others and with
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good pay.
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will not be afraid to exploit
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other trade
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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