The education you receive from your family is more important than the education you receive from school. To what extent do you agree with this statement and why?

It is certainly true that education has become an essential part of our lives, as it teaches everything required for

modern

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human

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to live happily and prosperously. There is a wide variety of different sources to get educated like schools, universities,

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and

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speaking with older people.

Nonetheless

, some people claim that the information from family is more important compared to that

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from schools. To some

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I agree with

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point of view and

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based on examples. At the outset,

school

education is very informative. Teachers deliver concepts which are in order and well-structured. They know very well how to teach their students in an explanatory way.

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,

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the

first

grade, students will be taught basic spelling rules and mathematics. The lessons have

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structure and are

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. The information is not only about reading books and writing activities

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they

also

get to know

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the outside world and they are very glad to participate in a wide range of eternal excursions, doing some involving tasks.

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they will get to know what they should do when they grow.

Additionally

, they

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get certified when they pass the exams.

This

can

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help children to select the appropriate field of

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such

as engineering, medicine or law when they leave

school

. On the other side of the argument, education from family is very important as well, because inside the home children learn about

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life and how to live in society. Nowadays, modern parents are overwhelmed with all needs of the family and much time they try to transfer the care and responsibility of their kids to an educational institution which is a huge mistake once it should not be seen as the major sponsor but as extra support.

In other words

, it is in a family environment that the child learns, copies and transmits actions learned.

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, a kid absorbs information and

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with more facilities during lovely moments with family and siblings rather

sitting

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than sitting

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in a bank of the educational institution. Because of

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teaching from family is moderately more influential than learning from

school

. In conclusion, the family as the

school

are extremely decisive for the growth of kids, though the nuclear family

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much more significant for creating good examples and personalities.