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All parents want the best opportunities for their children. There are some people who think that schools should teach children skills but others think having a range of subjects is better for a children's future. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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Recently, there have been arguments that the school teaches
children
 abilities meanwhile, a number of people mention that the range of
sectors
 learned by
children
 is better. There are merits and demerits respectively,
thus
 I am going to mention both sides of opinions.
Firstly
, as for the former statement, which is focused on
children
's
skills
. They are definitely significant for
children
's growing up.
For instance
,
generally
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,generally
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 people learn some social
skills
 when we were kids. Along to become an adult, it is more sophisticated
such
 as a way of relationships with others, and mind control, which is important in order to survive. They are the basic
skills
 of a person.
Thus
, using the time to learn about
children
's
skills
 influences several situations.
Secondly
, in terms of the latter statement which is having a range of subjects is better for a
children
's future. It is crucial for the future when
children
 take some exams for entering university or something. Nowadays, a variety of education majors are there,
moreover
, students must study some
sectors
 during adolescence. Because it is hard to study when becoming an adult due to time and the capacity of the brain. So, studying some
sectors
 is possible to extend
children
's future possibilities. In conclusion, some people believe that the planty of
sectors
 are learned by
children
 which is better than getting
children
's
skills
 during kids periods. Both are important for acquiring living
skills
.
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