Some people believe that children should be banned from using their phones during the school day. Others believe that children should be allowed to use their phones. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays

phone

has become part and parcel of life . Mobile is an electronic device which is mainly used for communication but in the 21st ,Century it is been

also

used

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for other purposes like entertainment .In my view , stopping children from using

phones

is not a solution rather we need to explain and educate them when to use a

phone

and when not to ,

this

could lead them to rethink

phones

and their uses. In our community mostly a fair share of people, especial elders think that banning

phones

in school would be a better solution

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so that there would not be any problems while attending classes .Students would be focusing on classes rather than playing games, checking messages or chatting with friends . But few people believe that the world has changed, and everyone has the right to use the

phone

. We should not impose rules on children's freedom ,

instead

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we need to make sure that they don't misuse it .Children are not just going to school to gain knowledge on ethics

instead

they are going to for learning

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required skillset for upcoming Worldly changes.

This

includes the

usage

of devices in the current world .

Instead

of banning they need to be educated and start learning how it works and what additional they can do to increase its features etc. In my view, we need to impose some strict rules regarding

phone

management on college campuses

instead

of banning

phones

completely. And educate them on the importance and

usage

of a

phone

in a well-balanced way.

This

will help them to understand and they will be choosing the best way to optimise the

usage

of electronic devices . I conclude that

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phone

has a lot of effects on our life, but it is for us to decide how to react and

this

is what we need to explain to our future generation. When we have a problem

instead

of

avoiding

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, it is always better we get prepared for it . And I am clearly suggesting confronting the problem.same for the

usage

of the

phone

rather than avoiding the

usage

of the

phone

,prepare them well