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The use of social media is replacing face-to-face interaction among many people in society. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

#media #interaction #people #society
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Nowadays
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Nowadays
, almost
entire
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 world
use
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 social
media
 to communicate, and it replays eyes to eyes interaction in our generation. I
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belive
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believe
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 the
face
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face
 contact is more important that any online
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communications
comunications
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communication
.
On-line
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communications
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communication
 is more needed in our century. We can
comunicationing
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communication ing
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people
peoplo
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people
 who are
in
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different
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continent
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continents
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 by
phone
;
moreover
, we do not have to interact with family every weekend and
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time
to travel
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 to them. We can simply ring on
face
time
 and talk with ourselves.
For instance
, my aunt is living in Germany. I do not have
time
 to visit her every month,so
i
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 can talk to her by
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smartphone
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smart
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smartphone
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phone
.
For another
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 reason, is
phone
 help.
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, when we are ill we do not have to go hospital or
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. We can book an hour in
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doctor
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 calendar and he will call
to
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you
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this
time
.
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, lots of
people
 in Poland use
this
phone
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,
however
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 government recommend old
people
 to do
such
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method
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. In spite of the fact that
,
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 social
media
 is replacing
face to
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face
 interaction it has much more demerits like
:
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 addiction and
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communications
communication
comunications
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communication
problem
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problems
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. Social
media
 is now very addictive because of
modern
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the modern
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algorithm
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algorithms
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. Lots of my generation is
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 to social
media
, they think that
this
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face
 contact. They spend their free
time
 scrolling
media
, rather than hanging out with their peers. In my school, almost every school goers after school spent free
time
 on
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instead
 of
interact
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 with friends . Many
people
 say that spending
to
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 much
time
 on social
media
 can cause social problems and bad social skills. It is fact that
,
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 many
people
 do not see the differences between real life and internet life. They think that
his
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 is the same, but it doesn't. In conclusion, even though social
media
 is important,
i
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believe
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belive
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believe
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 that
face to
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face
 interaction is the clue to not
have
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having
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 social and
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communications
communication
comunications
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communication
 problems.
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