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Violence in society increases when more violence is shown on television. To what extent do you agree or disagree?.

#violence #society #increases #television
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 those studying in community
schools
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schools
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lost half of their pupils between 2000 and 2009, from 24% to 12% and from 52% to 20% respectively.
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 the number of children who had attended specialists
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • media influence
  • desensitization
  • mimic
  • impressionable
  • copycat phenomenon
  • aggression
  • correlational
  • causal link
  • violent crime rates
  • educational role
  • glorification
  • cultural norms
  • social factors
  • community norms
  • regulatory measures
  • broadcasting restrictions
  • content rating systems
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