Inviting a friend You are studying English at a private language school attended by many international students. You are planning a surprise birthday party for a friend who has been feeling particularly sad and homesick. Write to another classmate and invite him / her to the party. In your letter: explain the reason for the party give the date and time of the party suggest what the classmate could bring to the party

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Dear Jay. How are you? How's my country treating you? I am planning a birthday party for Parkash as he's having difficulty adjusting. Recently, I have noticed that Parkash is missing his family a lot and often skipping classes because of his bad mood which is common for all people moving overseas leaving their families behind in their native country. To cherish him, I am planning a birthday party and inviting all my friends, so you must come too. Parkash's birthday is on the 16th of

this

month Leaving no more than 3 days for all the preparation.

However

, I have already booked a well-known restaurant Bay Vista Parramatta for a celebration at 7PM, which is on church street and 10

mins

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walk away from Parramatta station. Regarding gifts, you are more than welcome to bring any gift but if I were in your shoes I'd definitely buy him a guitar as he lost his only one on the train

last

week. If the guitar is not possible

then

go for perfume as he's fond of perfumes too. I hope to see you there at the party. Warm wishes, Aneel

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A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

1 paragraphs

190 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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