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The diagrams clearly show the 4 sources of
funds
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for the police budget in one area of Britain for the
years
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2018 and 2019 and how the portion of
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fund is distributed among three different heads. Overall, the largest contributor to the police budget is the national government for both
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, while other sources, mainly grants, are the least provider of
funds
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for two consecutive
years
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.
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, money spent on salaries was nearly double as compared to that on building and transport combined for the period in question. For the police budget, the national government contribution increased marginally to 177.8 Million in 2018, while the
funds
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granted from local taxes soared in the year 2018, reaching 102.30 Million.
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, money received from other sources was roughly the same each year. Regarding the expenditure, while most
funds
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were directed towards salaries, the highest expenditure for both
years
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, the least of it was channelled towards technology, with 14% in 2018. That being said, the expenditure on buildings and transport was fairly consistent, with 17% each year.
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