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Films and computer games which contain violence are very popular. Some People believe they have a negative effect on society and so should be banned. Other people, however, say they are just harmless and help people to relax. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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There are some
People
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 that
Media
 which presents Roughness And ferocity Get bad
adverse
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and adverse
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 on society.
Thus
, we must prohibit it But, There is another opinion
say
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that say
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 there is Not a big problem That will damage
nation
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the nation
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; It just
helping
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helps
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 some
people
 To be more comfortable I agree that
the
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virtual reality is really harmful the juniors, youth, elder
people
, we can say all individuals
of
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in
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the
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apply
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society. In
this
 essay, both Perspectives along with my point will be demonstrated Before reaching a conclusion. On one hand,
Media
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the Media
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 is really
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well-liked
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well liked
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well-liked
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 But it's bad
cause
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because
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 it spread severity and, it is the main reason for crimes in cities as Kill
people
 and
stole
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stealing
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 them, what can be said
that
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apply
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. banning combat gaming ,
movies
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and movies
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 is the solution
for
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to
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this
 problem.
The
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 other hand. Videos games and violent films. Is just helping us. To be entertained in our free time. And we just to know
it
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what it
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 is. A movie or game. Not all these Things. We sure. Effect on us. Badly. Maybe it's not bad like that. As an example. Children Who Kill or hurt each other
On
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In
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 schools As They Treated With each other with
Violency
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Violence
 ; they Just Act like the actors in films
..
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.
...
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 In my opinion. I agree
that
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with that
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. All
this
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these
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Media
 is favoured and
this
 is not good for our nations as all these things affect our youth And the children
deleteriouly
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deleteriously
deleterious
..
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.
...
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 must
disallowe
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disallow
disallowed
 all
violence
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violent
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media
, films and games.
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