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Women can do everything that men can and they even do it better.They also can do many things that men can not.But it is a fact that their work is not appreciated as much as mens,although thay have to sacrifice a lot for their family and career....it is said:A woman place is in the home.What do you think

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Women
 have come a long way and we can say that they are on par with
men
 in terms of their performance and skill set.
However
 , the truth is that remuneration in terms of salary or recognition never equals a man. In
this
 Essay, I will discuss how
women
 are important contributing members of a community and are not only efficient homemakers.
Women
 in
this
 era have excelled in many fields like teaching, medicine, politics , the war front , the corporate world etc ,to name a few.
Women
 are the epitome of strength and determination,the ride to these positions has not been easy for most
women
 as they have to fight the social system and prefixed notions about what a woman is capable of.
Women
 are cognitively and physically wired differently than
men
 and yet put through the same rigorous work to achieve what they have.It would not be an exaggeration to say that
women
 perform better in certain jobs and are definitely better
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multi-tasker. Unfortunately , Though the world has developed so far ,the work environment is still male-dominated. When it comes to salary and benefits
men
 are always entitled to better packages than female. Surveys have shown that
men
 are preferred for senior management positions compared to females. Studies
also
 reveal that decisions or opinions given by male staff hold more weight than the ones offered by their female counterpart. Female entrepreneurs receive less capital funding support compared to
men
. To conclude,
Women
 are still considered less efficient than
men
 . The shift in
this
 thought process is happening and still has a long way to go. Leaders need to close these gender gaps in pay and career advancement and eliminate gender discrimination in the workplace.
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