the exploration and development of safe alternatives to fossil fuels should be the most important global priority today. to what extent do u agree or disagree?
There is a contentious argument over whether or not the development of alternatives to fossil
fuels
should be the world
most significant priority today. Change noun form
world's
Although
people
should find ways to preserve fossil fuels
, I firmly believe that developing an alternative
solution must be done. This
is because they will run out in near future no matter what so it is necessary to start exploring new methods.
To begin
with, natural resources are beginning to vanish. If the government does not create an alternative
to them, it is possible that people
around the globe face problems such
as no electricity. It is due to the fact that electricity is made from fossil fuels
. The government should invest and prioritise replacing them. For instance
, a recent study in Pakistan has shown that electricity could be made from the burning of garbage in order to save uranium.
Furthermore
,fossil fuels
play a crucial role in the country's economy. If there will be no safe alternative
, a country's economy could be Wrong verb form
damaged
damage
. Correct your spelling
damaged
This
may results
in Change the verb form
result
the
war. For Correct article usage
apply
this
purpose
it is extremely important to explore and develop an Add a comma
,purpose
alternative
to natural resources to maintain the
peace in the world. Correct article usage
apply
For example
, The New York Times reported in March 2012 that a
war was Remove the article
apply
broke
over natural resources between Yemen and Oman which resulted in Wrong verb form
broken
destruction
of Add an article
the destruction
Change noun form
people's
people'
needs.
In conclusion, according to my perspective, the government should find ways to replace fossil Correct your spelling
people's
fuels
to maintain peace in the world and save people
's basic needs.Submitted by FATYMALIK71 on
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