People are becoming famous with the help of TV programme and the internet.  Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.

In

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

modern life, individuals  are turning out to

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

well-known humans through  the

Internet

and

TV

programme

.

This

essay will examine the advantages and disadvantages of becoming famous with the

assist

Replace the word

assistance

show examples

of the

Internet

and

TV

programme

and provide

with

Change preposition

apply

show examples

a logical conclusion. The two main advantages of becoming

iconic

Add an article

an iconic

show examples

person through the

Internet

 or

TV

programme

are

these kind

Change the determiner

this kind

these kinds

show examples

of

condition

Fix the agreement mistake

conditions

show examples

provide

people

with

the

Correct article usage

a

show examples

myriad number of money and they have

a

Remove the article

apply

show examples

respect

among

Change preposition

from

show examples

the

Change the article

a

show examples

large number of

people

.

Firstly

, if

people

are putting their videos or other things on the

internet

after

this

things continuously bring too much money duration of their working life.

Secondly

, after years, they can commerce to earn the high respect  among the  individuals and they are able to go

to

Change preposition

apply

show examples

everywhere without any problem, because of  high esteem among the

people

.

However

, to be a famous person with the help of

TV

Correct article usage

a TV

show examples

programme

Fix the agreement mistake

programmes

show examples

or the

internet

has some major disadvantages like

disappearance

Add an article

the disappearance

show examples

of

career

Correct article usage

a career

show examples

and have not free time to spend with family members. most

people

who

was

Change the verb form

were

show examples

famous  through the

internet

their rank or esteem might

be reduce

Change the verb form

be reduced

show examples

after

his

Correct pronoun usage

apply

show examples

or

her

Correct pronoun usage

their

show examples

rank rise to the peak and

this

thins

lead

Correct subject-verb agreement

leads

show examples

to bad conditions.

Correct your spelling

Moreover

Mower

Morewer

Correct your spelling

Moreover

,  after they to be a famous person, they may not have any free time for

family

Correct pronoun usage

their family

show examples

and

this

things lead to

poor

Add an article

a poor

show examples

relationship. To conclude,

although

there are some advantages like

a

Remove the article

apply

show examples

good respect and earn the money, it has an extremely negative impact

for

Change preposition

on

show examples

family and their high rank may

be reduce

Change the verb form

be reduced

show examples

.