Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes ( for example working for charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to young children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A number of people advocate that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of

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school curriculum. I agree with

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in the following paragraphs. In the

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place, it is obvious that

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volunteering is providing a huge benefit

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helping those in need. Namely, communication, social skills, socialization, friendship and many others.

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of skills can be

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out only at events related to volunteering.

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, when students work in

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or group they improve

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of

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and boost

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skills.

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, while they are meeting

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of people and nations, they expand their horizons. What is more, it is undeniable fact that unpaid community service may be very imperative for a portfolio that will be submitted to dissimilar universities and employers.

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behind

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is that nowadays many universities are requesting letters of thanks and certificates

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volunteering. To give an illustration,

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and employers believe that if individuals do

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outstanding job for which they

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paid,

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for the salary they would work even harder and faster. In conclusion, it can hardly be denied that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part not only of high school programs but,

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, should be part of

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and

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programs. Since both the volunteers themselves and the society to whom

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volunteers

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assistance is provided remain in the black.