People are becoming famous with the help of TV programmes and the internet. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.

In today's contemporary

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, social media is considered

one

of the major

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to be renowned to the whole

world

.

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essay will discuss both pros and cons of

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statement.

First

and foremost, there are a number of significant benefits of becoming a well-known person all over the

world

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the aid of the

internet

since it gives an opportunity to individuals to make online

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like videos, vlogs and many more which

help

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them to be a famous person.

For example

, there are several indexes are available on the

internet

,

such

as

,

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TikTok, YouTube and Google which can help people to be popular.

In addition

to

this

,

by

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the aid of

this kind

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of social media platforms humans are not only trying to be

a

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famous but

also

they are making a huge amount of money since

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platforms are considered

one

of the biggest

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of income and nowadays, hundreds of humans are making a considerable amount of money just by sharing their daily lives or interests through the

internet

.

Furthermore

, televisions are

also

one

of the major factors that play a vital role

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becoming famous

through

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the

world

as at the present time everybody possesses a television. Turning to the other side of the argument, despite the obvious advantages of

this

development, there are

also

some disadvantages

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this

.

Firstly

, these days more and more people spend most of their time on the

internet

for the purpose of being famous among

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society

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while paying

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minimum

attention

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to their families and outdoor activities and

this

may cause mental and health problems.

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,

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some people

who

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consider

some

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online video

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a matter of annoyance since nowadays majority of the videos which take place on the

internet

are immoral. To conclude, having everything mentioned

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I can come to the conclusion

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that, in

fact

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the

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social media is

one

of the primary factors for humans who are willing to be

reknown

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known

through the nations since it gives an opportunity to be

a

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popular within a short period of time,

however

, it can be

also

mentally dangerous to individuals' health.