You have a full time job and are also doing a part time evening course. You now find that you can not continue the course. Write a letter to your tutor. In your letter, describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

Dear Mr Robinson, I am writing to let you know about my decision to stop attending the Business English course starting
next
week. Basically, I have a conflict between my current job and studying. The part-time job allows me to earn some money which is extremely beneficial to the economical situation we live. It was a tough move and I am still hesitating, but, unfortunately, I have to switch my focus to the work. The problem is I have very little time to divide between my current work duties and the course. My performance is decreasing and I have already been warned that if I continue to pursue
this
avenue, they will not have another option, but ask me to leave.
On the other hand
, I hope I will be able to resume classes
next
year if the tension in the economy goes away. If it were possible to do that, I would be grateful to return. Yours faithfully, Artem Altukhov.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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