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Many parents complain that computer games have no value to their children’s study. On the contrary those online games have produced a lot of negative effects on their mental and physical development . What is your opinion

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The current generation of kids
are
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 obsessed with
computer
games
, while parents feel that it gives no academic benefit, it
also
 affects the cognitive and physical
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development
develpment
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development
 of a child. In
this
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 we will discuss
about
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the negative effects of
computer
games
. With the invasion of technology into our homes , children are getting easy access to
computer
games
. Schools are
also
 now
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implementing
impleneting
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implementing
 many academic
activity
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 through online
games
 to make it interesting for the students. Due to
this
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 the
youngesters
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youngsters
 have constant access to gadgets like
laptop
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 or mobile which gives them plenty of
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opportunities
oppurtunities
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opportunities
 to play these
games
. But
this
 is being done at the cost of their emotional, cognitive, social and physical development. The obsession with playing
games
are
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 making them socially aloof. They prefer to rather play alone in their room than interact with family or friends. The gaming platform is
also
 where they develop
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a friendship
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friendship
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 with complete strangers who may not be the right influence for them.Constant gaming
also
 affects
the
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physical
physcial
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physical
 development as they hardly get out to play.Studies have shown that children who spend a lot of time
on screen
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displays
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 features of attention deficit. Engaging in screen time just before going causes them to have sleep disturbance. In a
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nutshell
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nut shell
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, I strongly agree that
computer
games
 are addictive and
holds
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 little value. Schools ad parents have equal responsibility to make sure that
the
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access to these platforms
are
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 limited and
they
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that they
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 have more
oppurtunity
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opportunity
 to participate in sports.
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