Some people believe that it is wrong to keep animals in zoos, while others think that zoos are important for education and conservation. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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These days, the moral conversation about whether is more beneficial to keep
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in artificial environments or release them into the wilderness is becoming a heated one. In my opinion, all living creatures are entitled to freedom and should not be kept in captivity. On the one hand, there is a fair point in rising against zoos as these facilities are in most cases in appalling conditions and
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end up bringing more negative outcomes than benefits. Those who share
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view argue that when
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organizations lack adequate funding and infrastructure,
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end up suffering irreversible consequences
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as chronic diseases or even early death.
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, a zoo in Buenos aires was accused of negligence after its polar bear had died of depression which resulted in its final closure.
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, the conservation of exotic
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could help save several species and
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protect biodiversity. Wildlife sanctuaries,
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, have professionals strictly dedicated to the research and rescue of creatures in danger of extinction.
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, assisting
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in distress and studying what measures can be taken to avoid the loss of precious kinds are some of the tasks that zoos should always carry out.
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, nature is wise and untouched land and species could
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thrive on their own if humans did not intervene and step in. To conclude, even though both views are considered in today's society, I wholeheartedly believe that
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should be left alone. Wild creatures have been on the earth far longer than humans and will most likely figure out how to survive without the human touch.
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