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It's been seen that reading for pleasure develops imaginations and better language skills than to watch TV. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#pleasure #imaginations #language #skills #tv
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 or the other hobby to engage themselves in leisure time.
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 of the most popular hobbies is reading.
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 helps to improve imagination and language skills than spending time
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watching television. Personally, I agree with the above statement and the following expository paragraphs will expatiate my views with lucid examples.
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 with, reading expands linguistic style. Would like to cite my own example here, in order to clear my English examination I have started reading many articles which
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have not
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 only increased my vocabulary but
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, the writers or poets use to read many books or journals which inspires them, enhances their imagination and at
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 completes their own creation. Recent research concludes that the reader's imagination power is very high because their horizon is not limited to
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 content and they can correlate them. In conclusion, there are many plus points of reading, simultaneously the fact can't be denied that watching TV enhances our capabilities, as in includes combination of visual and sound effects which has got more lasting memory and is retained in
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 own habits and choose the appropriate method.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • develops
  • imaginations
  • better language skills
  • watch
  • TV
  • agree
  • disagree
  • enhances
  • promotes
  • passive
  • engaging
  • stimulate
  • creativity
  • balanced
  • approach
  • beneficial
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