In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

It is true that despite the great advances in agriculture ,many

people

are still suffering from starvation .One of the major causes of

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problem

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political conflicts and poverty .

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suppling

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those

people

with aids and food can help reduce

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.

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in more detail.

To begin

with, political conflict is found in almost all countries suffering from hunger .possibly because

people

become preoccupied with conflict so deeply ,that they do not pay attention to

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which can develop their country .

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,Southern Sudan is a country with great

potentials

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own

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just the right lands for agriculture ,but internal wars resulted in

scarce

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of

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resources ,which

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lead

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to poverty and starvation .

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, wars and conflict can

leads

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to many problems among which is starvation .

However

,there are some things that can be done to mitigate

this

problem.Obviously ,putting an end to wars is one thing

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the

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can

radicly

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however

,

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since

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is not always applicable ,the

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solution

solustion

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can begin with charity organizations which can deliver

foods

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and various

kind

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of help to these unfortunate countries .

Unicif

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Unicef

UNICEF

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for instance

,

a

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big charity organization that helped a lot of poor

people

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around

aroung

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around

the world ,not only providing them with food but

also

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over their heads.

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way

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aids

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from

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the organization

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organization

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and developed countries can help reduce the rate of worldwide hunger. In conclusion,

considerable

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number of

people

around the world go hungry .

this

essay discussed that conflicts both

enternaly

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internally

internal

and externally

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a major

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contributor

contributer

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contributors

to

this

issue ,and international

aids

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may

will

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lessen the problem.