In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

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It is true that despite the great advances in agriculture ,many

people

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are still suffering from starvation .One of the major causes of

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problem

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political conflicts and poverty .

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supplying

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those

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with aids and food can help reduce

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suffer

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essay will tackle these causes and

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in more detail.

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with, political conflict is found in almost all countries suffering from hunger .possibly because

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become preoccupied with conflict so deeply ,that they do not pay attention to

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which can develop their country .

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,Southern Sudan is a country with great

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just the right lands for agriculture ,but internal wars resulted in

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resources ,which

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lead

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to poverty and starvation .

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, wars and conflict can

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to many problems among which is starvation .

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,there are some things that can be done to mitigate

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problem.Obviously ,putting an end to wars is one thing

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since

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is not always applicable ,the

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can begin with charity organizations which can deliver

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and various

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of help to these unfortunate countries .

Unicif

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Unicef

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big charity organization that helped a lot of poor

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around

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around

the world ,not only providing them with food but

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over their heads.

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aids

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from

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the organization

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and developed countries can help reduce the rate of worldwide hunger. In conclusion,

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number of

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around the world go hungry .

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essay discussed that conflicts both

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internally

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a major

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issue ,and international

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lessen the problem.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

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Task Achievement: 9.0

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4 paragraphs

270 words

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