The internet is a great source of information and has opened up opportunities for people to learn all around the world. Is all information reliable on the internet? What could be done to control information online?

We live in an age when the
internet
is considered
as
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an essential
information
resource,
therefore
countless studying opportunities have been recently presented to individuals.
However
, I am firmly convinced that only a certain portion of
data
, found on the
internet
, can be fully trusted, for
this
reason, authorities are highly recommended to take some proper measures for the issue resolution.
To begin
with, there is no denying that the rise of the
internet
has brought significant positive influence to the overall
humanity
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development, mainly in the form of deliberate new
knowledges
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knowledge
pieces of knowledge
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acquisition, including online studying option, that has gained
its
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popularity due to the restrictions, caused by the COVID-19 pandemic. Unfortunately, whereas most
of
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the
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people find it quite pleasurable to consult with the
Internet
on
variety
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of questions, not all of the
information
, stored there, can be
worth
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of trust. Cultivation of cultural stereotypes should serve as an example with the increasing cases of
travelers
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revealing that the actual on-site situation in terms of living aspects or locals’
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patterns are completely different from what they expected, and even more notably, misleading is usually caused by the false facts, popped up on some random websites. Publication of the wrong
information
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literally everyone has access to, can be resulted in serious misunderstanding and conflicts in the communication process. There is no doubt, with the growing concerns regarding unreliable
data
, placed on
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of social
networkings
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,
government
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is highly recommended to take
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legal measures in order to protect its people from the negative impact of false
information
the
internet
potentially holds. To cite an example, in many developed countries, the vandals who intentionally publish confusing
information
on the
internet
are fined by the policy-makers.
In addition
, considering the difficulty of the
internet
data
flow
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, as well as the danger of the government crossing the line of citizens’ freedom of speech by taking exceedingly strict censor actions, it is
also
will not be superfluous for civilians to always doubt and double-check all the content. Weighting up everything mentioned above, in my opinion, with the socially responsible authorities, taking
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steps to cope with wrong
information
and, the
last
but not least, mature users self-consciously consuming content that the
internet
provides, the problem of unreliable
data
will not be seen as alarmingly important as it has been.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • repository
  • accessibility
  • credibility
  • regulation
  • misinformation
  • fake news
  • biased reporting
  • public opinion
  • fact-checking
  • curate
  • digital literacy
  • discern
  • censorship
  • free speech
  • integrity
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