You have eaten at a restaurant and it was such a terrible experience that you have decided to inform the manager by letter of what happened and that you want your money back. Things to include: – Facts. You need to be concise but explain what happened. – Polite. No one responds to insults. – Outline what you wish from this. What do you want to happen? – Firmness. You want to be taken seriously.

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Dear Manager, I'm writing
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letter in connection with the terrible experience that I had in your restaurant yesterday.
To begin
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with, I visited your diner yesterday with my family around 7.00 p.m. It was busy but the staff decided to ignore our presence and asked us to wait for 45 minutes even though we already made a reservation. The waiters were not willing to take orders as they were busy with their smartphones and our food arrived late and was cold. I did not mean to insult or be rude but the customer service needs to improve so
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situations never happen again at your place. It could be of great help if you could refund our money back as it will compensate us for the worst experience we had the other night.
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, please ensure to handle
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issue as
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might impact your business in a negative way. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Akila
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