Some people soy thol industrial growth is necessory to solve poverty, but some other people orgue that industrial growth is causing environmental problems and it should be stopped. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Both diagrams illustrate the present
plan
of a house level and a recommended
plan
for other types of construction work. The
first
diagram provides the existing floor scheme which is divided by a long
hall
into two big rooms. The entrance to the floor takes place through the entrance door and
then
through the
stairs
leading to the
hall
. Under the
stairs
, it is seen storage place, albeit in the
kitchen
no storage. On the right side of the
hall
, according to the
plan
is situated a large
kitchen
, and on the left side the spacious living room. The
second
diagram proposes a new
plan
with several changes. One of the changes it can be seen in the
kitchen
is the
kitchen
furniture being fixed. Another modification in the
plan
is the
hall
removal and including two internal doors leading to the living room.
Finally
, the substantial difference can be noticed in that the entrance has no
stairs
,
however
, the
stairs
are located near the living room. All in all both diagrams put in evidence two possible plans for a floor building, one which exists and one with some perspective enhancements that can be adjusted for some building work.
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