It is difficult for many people to create a balance between their professional and their personal life. What are the causes of this? What can be done to solve this problem?

Everybody wants to maintain their professional and personal
life
however
, many of them face difficulties with it.In
this
essay,I will discuss the causes behind it and try to give a solution to
this
problem
.
To begin
with,there are many reasons behind
such
kind of
problem
one of them is the wrong way of thinking.
Moreover
,
people
do not find the difference between their work
life
and family
life
,they mix up between them up,
for example
,a person does work in the office from 10am to 5pm it is his professional
life
,after and before
this
particular
time
man or women are part of their families,
furthermore
,his or her self as well.
However
,after and before duty
time
they think about the responsibility left behind them.
This
is what we can call a lack of knowledge and experience.Another reason behind it was
people
are run for money always from one place to another.They even do not have
time
for eating and sleeping as well.
On the other hand
, it is the reality that both the
problem
and solution are the two sides of the same coin which run in parallel.The main solution to the
problem
is to learn self and from family and experience the
people
around us.There is no school or college to learn about
this
topic,
however
, we can learn from our own family and neighbourhood as experienced
people
around as well,
for instance
,we can talk and listen to our family members about what they want from us. everyone is eager for love and care, especially
time
for them to spend. In conclusion,most
people
still do not know the reason behind
this
, and that's why their family is always angry with them.So everyone should learn money is not everything,their health and family happiness is
also
the most important points in their
life
.
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