These day it is much easier for many people to travel to different countries for tourism than in the past. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

There is no denying the fact that

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tourism has become popular as compared to the past because of how easy it has become. One school of thought opines that now

people

do not have to spend so much

time

and money on going back and forth to the embassy, whilst others consider that

people

have to wait longer for approvals and chances of rejection are increasing.

Although

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is now extremely expensive, I firmly believe that its benefits outshine its cons. Initiating

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the best possible benefits, the most significant advantage is that the process has become hassle-free due to the availability of modern technology as

people

can apply for visas at the touch of a button while sitting in the comfort of their homes.

Moreover

, they do not have to personally go to the embassy and wait for their turn.

This

not only saves them

time

but

also

money as they do not have to commute from home to the office and

then

back.

For instance

, a recent survey held by the UAE

government

found that tourism has increased by 19% ever since the Ministry of Travel

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made the process online. On the paradoxical side, there are drawbacks as well.

First

and foremost,

people

have to wait for months to travel anywhere.

This

is because a lot of

people

are applying for tourism visas. If the number of applications increases, it will take plenty of

time

for the

government

to grant them permission.

This

might result in the rejection of visas too as the

government

can allow only

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number of tourists at a

time

.

For example

, the Australian

government

only permit 2 % of visitors from Pakistan as applicants were increasing. In conclusion, according to my perspective, its pros outweigh its cons.

However

, if

this

topic has many positives, the negative points of

this

notion may not be underestimated.