Today, more and more people use robots to do tasks at home and at work. Do you think it is a positive or negative development? Why?

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robots

are became

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evident in many of our lives and business. Some people considered to have a

robot

at home could reduce

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consuming

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on housework or some labour demanding business

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as

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restaurants could maintain the costs of hiring more employees. In my opinion, it is positive to use

robots

for

a

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better growth of the country and an easier life to live with. In the following paragraphs, I will discuss my

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stand points

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with

explainations

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explanations

explanation

.

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business perspective, running a company is

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stressful

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especially

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with the high expenses from expensive labour costs. Having a

robot

could possibly help with many types of

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in order to retain an upward organised

and

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health management system and increase customer satisfaction.

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robot

could deliver

foods

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directly to the customer's table with a matching pre-set number in their program,

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method will not only rises the efficiency of the restaurant

,

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but

also

could avoid making mistake by

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the menu. Another reason to support my point of view is

the

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robots

might

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human lives. Getting all the house chores done after a busy day at work sounds very

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to

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many mordent

family

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in the city.

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a

robot

at home to complete the cleaning job, it

allow

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you

concentrate

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on your own time

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relaxation, cooking or even when you watching TV on your couch. In conclusion,

Although

robots

might be not affordable for everyone at the moment,

but

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if we could take

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advantages

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of

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course more issues and

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time-wasting

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time wasting

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tasks could be probably disappeared.