Many people think governments should spend money only on medical care and education and not theaters or sports stadiums. Do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, governments are increasingly conscious on the balanced investing and spending of resources across a wide variety of infrastructure like roads, governance, healthcare,

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, sports, entertainment(

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community halls, theaters, auditoriums et cetra) so that the

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are able to utilize them for their needs.

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a concept which is primarily based on the famous saying "All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy". I totally disagree on the spending done only on healthcare or

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, the citizen's health being important, requires good hospitals and specialized healthcare facilities, as the nation's progress is reflected by the net health of its

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. A recent research shows that Bhutan has the happiest

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in the world because of the fact that they are

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the healthiest

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. The same goes with

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: the best example is Netherlands where a good number of their population are double graduates due to their good educational institutions. We see how important both medical care and

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are important in a nation's growth.

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, one cannot neglect the sports which is a critical part of a person's life in keeping him/her fit and healthy. Taking active participation is part of all school/college syllabus so that a child gets all-round development. How can we forget the leisure activities of a society like entertainment: basically

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and performing arts. Without

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, it would not have been possible to hear really good

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from legends

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as Michael Jackson, Prince(Queen), Beatles and other renowned groups.

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actually refreshes and re-energises a person and is an equally important part of his well-being.

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, we notice that for a country to progress in all spheres of human evolution, all key areas,

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as medical care,

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, sports, theater, governance are to be given balanced impetus and encouragement, so that their

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are able to enjoy the good parts of life.

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