In some large cities, people have to pay a fee when they drive their cars into the city centre, in a policy to reduce the number of cars in the city. Give reasons in support of and opposing this policy, and give your own opinion.

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In a few urban areas, individuals have to pay a charge when they drive their
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into the
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centre, using the
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to reduce the number of vehicles in the
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. There are many supportive reasons I have like, reducing pollution and controlling traffic.In my ,opinion it is a good way to stop
people
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for
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using their
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unnecessary The
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point is, by the
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environment is cleaner.
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, if
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have to pay to drive in the large
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centre they try to avoid to not to go in
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areas to save their money and if they go
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are more aware and try to do their work in a one-time and not to come frequently.
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, in India, there
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some big states where
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need to give fees to enter
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the
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centre.
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, pollution is reduced in the states and nations.
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, it maintains rules and more safety on the roads. To put it more clear, when
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pay and
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of
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they try to stop and not go unnecessary, which makes roads stress-free
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vehicles and it is
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easy for traffic police to displace individuals.
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, less traffic is on the roads they have less chance of accidents and it saves more
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people
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life
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the rule saves folk time as well.
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, in the UK, government make
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rule to save the population time and for their safety.
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,
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are safer and break fewer rules. In conclusion, the
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is not only to reduce the number of
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but
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they help to save nature and
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important time and life as well. In my point of view, the rule makes
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more aware of the environment and stop using
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unnecessarily.
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