SOME PEOPLE THINK THAT CARS ARE THE BEST WAY TO TRAVEL IN A CITY WHILE OTHERS THINK THAT BICYCLES ARE BETTER. DISCUSS BOTH POINTS OF VIEW AND GIVE YOUR OPINION.

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Transportation is widely used by everyone nowadays for
traveling
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travelling
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from one place to another within the city or outside the country. Some people claim that cars are
convenient
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compared to bicycles.
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, other individuals argue that bikes are
easiest
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means of transport than motor vehicles. I will discuss my views in the upcoming paragraphs with relevant examples.
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with, using cycles
are
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the less expensive transportation
methods
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. The advantages are, it decreases pollution and reduces traffic. We can easily arrive
to
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at
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a place
in
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desired time. It minimizes the emission of
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carbon dioxide
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carbon-dioxide
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carbon dioxide
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and saves energy. It is
also
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environmental friendly.
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of
this
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, it protects our atmosphere from
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of gases and saves from
green house
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greenhouse
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effect. Global warming and ozone depletion are the major problems today.
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,
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over-exploitation
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over exploitation
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and industrialization leads to
increase
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in diseases like stroke. Recent research shows
rise
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a rise
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in chronic
disease
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diseases
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like cancer.
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, in some
places
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it is hard to use bicycles. In
such
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situations,
car
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the car
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comes into use.
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, in countries like Tokyo,
besides
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the pros of highly developed bridges and
roads
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it is difficult to travel a long place
in
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cycle
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a cycle
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. The companies where we are working
in
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are far more
distance
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from our residence. In
such
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cases, we do not have any other option to go with. We can
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share our
ride
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rides
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with our colleagues. Sometimes it shows our economical background too. To sum up, both
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vehicle has their own advantage and disadvantage. My opinion is, as of
health
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concerned, using bicycles will be a better option.
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to
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, it saves energy and emissions of harmful gases into
atmosphere
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the atmosphere
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and protects us from pollution. Serves us with
eco-friendly
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an eco-friendly
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atmosphere.
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