some people think that the best way to improve road transport safety is to let the deiver test each year. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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are increasing at high speed all over the world.

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most important problem that many countries face.

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, whether all the

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to have driving

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test

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each year is a controversial issue. In my opinion, I deeply disagree

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idea. With the number of

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raising at high speed. More and more

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was happened

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. There are three reasons

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situation.

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, the driver’s bad skills

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the main reason. Due to the lack of practice

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driving, lots of new drivers don’t know how to drive their

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safely and don’t know how to avoid

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accident.

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, when drivers notice that

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car who behind

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and stopped suddenly, they didn’t adopt their speed or press the brake.

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the pedestrian

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is another reason. Lots of

people

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who walk on the street don’t worry about the

cars

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are

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coming. They

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cross

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the street whenever they want without watching traffic lights. The

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reason is the situation of

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. Bad

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situation

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will cause

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an accident

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accident

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.

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, everyone passed the

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of driving before they get

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driver

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licence. The

test

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of driving isn’t as same as driving in fact, especially for the mental.

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people

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their

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of driving, they are concentrating on the road and the order from the examiner, but when they are driving as normal, they would feel

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. So that they would have

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easily. The best way to prevent

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is that government should increase the power of punishment to

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who

affent

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affect

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people

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through social media is

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a good method. In conclusion, I disagree that

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test

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every year. It is not a good way to avoid

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transport

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.