some people think that the best way to improve road transport safety is to let the deiver test each year. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, traffic

accidents

are increasing at high speed all over the world.

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most important problem that many countries face.

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, whether all the

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need

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to have driving

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each year is a controversial issue. In my opinion, I deeply disagree

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idea. With the number of

cars

raising at high speed. More and more

accidents

was happened

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. There are three reasons

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this

situation.

Firstly

, the driver’s bad skills

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the main reason. Due to the lack of practice

for

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driving, lots of new drivers don’t know how to drive their

cars

safely and don’t know how to avoid

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accident.

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, when drivers notice that

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car who behind

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and stopped suddenly, they didn’t adopt their speed or press the brake.

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, the bad habit of

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the pedestrian

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pedestrian

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is another reason. Lots of

people

who walk on the street don’t worry about the

cars

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coming. They

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the street whenever they want without watching traffic lights. The

third

reason is the situation of

cars

. Bad

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situation

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will cause

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an accident

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accident

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.

Moreover

, everyone passed the

test

of driving before they get

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driver

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licence. The

test

of driving isn’t as same as driving in fact, especially for the mental.

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, when

people

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their

test

of driving, they are concentrating on the road and the order from the examiner, but when they are driving as normal, they would feel

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. So that they would have

accidents

easily. The best way to prevent

accidents

is that government should increase the power of punishment to

people

who

affent

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affect

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the law of traffic. Educating all

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people

through social media is

also

a good method. In conclusion, I disagree that

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a

drive

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test

every year. It is not a good way to avoid

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transport

accidents

.