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Some people say that in the modern world it is very difficult for people to have a healthy lifestyle. Others, however, say that it is easy for people to be healthy and fit if they want to be. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

#people #world #lifestyle
It’s
 argued
that
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whether it is difficult or not for people to have a healthy
lifestyle
 in the modern world. We all agree that
the
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life stress or some bad habits
sometime
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 lead us to
a
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 unhealthy
lifestyle
. But in my points of
view
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it’s
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depend
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 on
you
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whether you
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to
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whether to
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 chance be healthy or not. Actually, there is really hard for people to have a healthy
lifestyle
, especially
like
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students or workers, because they have much stress from
study
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 or
job
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.
They in
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 order to achieve some target work day and night that makes
them
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 have not enough
time
 to sleep well and some of them even have no
time
 or don’t want to eat, others will eat a lot of junk food to relax
themselves
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, and
it’s
 unhealthy both for the body and mind. Whereas, if you really want to be healthy
it’s
 not that difficult for you. To illustrate, if you want to keep fit and winder a good diet
then
 you will avoid ordering junk foods
instead
 of
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things
stthings
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things
 like vegetables, fruit, meat and so on and you drink eight water
everyday
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 because the scientist said that
drink
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drinking
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 more water can help to get away from
ill
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illness
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 and keep your health.
It’s sounds
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 easy for people to do
this
 thing you just need to do the things like
this
step
 by
step
 and keep those good habits for some
time
then
 you will have a healthy
lifestyle
. All in all,
although
 most of us in the modern world actually have
a
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 unhealthy
lifestyle
 we stay up late, eat junk food and have no
time
 to
do
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exercise.
Nevertheless
, we can make a decision on our own to
choice
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 which
lifestyle
 to live if we really want to be healthy and fit, we can change it, even at the beginning
it’s
 a little bit hard but
it’s
 will be easier by the
time
 we just need to
step
 by
step
the
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you will open the door of
healthy
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a healthy
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lifestyle
!
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