Some people think that job satisfaction is more important than job security. Others think that people cannot expect to enjoy a job and that having a permanent job is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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a quart
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the world
world
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world's
people
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owners
people
think that job
satisfaction
is more important than job
security others think that people
cannot expect to enjoy a job
and that having a
permanent Correct article usage
apply
job
satisfaction
is always be
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job
security. The following paragraph highlight
my opinion with relevant examples.
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Firstly
, job
satisfaction
always get
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gets
sense
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a sense
filment
and pleasure for us and Correct your spelling
filament
satisfy
employers are more important to the productivity of the Replace the word
satisfying
company
. For example
, anyone in this
word
that satisfy with their work they do their best in any situation. Correct your spelling
world
Secondly
, it’s easier
way to motivate us Add an article
an easier
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own. No need to Change preposition
on
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motivate
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a motivater
motivater
or Correct your spelling
motivate
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to Correct your spelling
supervisor
fallow
them to Correct your spelling
follow
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achieve
achive
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achieve
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their goal
goal
. If they are happy and Fix the agreement mistake
goals
motivative
they find Replace the word
motivated
easy
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an easy
way
do something like Fix the agreement mistake
ways
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innovator
innovation
innovater
. For instants, “MAS” Correct article usage
an innovater
company
monthly assume the satisfaction
of their workers because of
satisfied Change preposition
apply
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employers
employees
employeers
follow Correct your spelling
employees
this
life Correct determiner usage
these
goles
and Correct your spelling
goals
also
they need to Correct your spelling
achieve
achive
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achieve
company
goles
too. Correct your spelling
goals
Moreover
, they are be
the Change the verb form
are
advance
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advanced
company
states.
However
, some people
imagine that people
cannot expect to enjoy a job
and that having a permanent job
is more important. For example
, Apple
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an Apple
company
owner, he
stopped to successful working in his friend’s Correct pronoun usage
apply
company
that
he Correct word choice
because
was not satisfy
and Change the verb form
was not satisfied
be
a self-Wrong verb form
was
emplyee
in the world. Correct your spelling
employee
employed
Permanent
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A permanent
job
is important but we have to enjoy what we do.The concequence
of Correct your spelling
consequence
unsatisfy
staff get Correct your spelling
unsatisfied
bad
impression of the Add an article
a bad
company
and effect to
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apply
the
productivity too.
In conclusion, Correct article usage
apply
Job
satisfaction
is more important than having permanent
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a permanent
job
. If Correct your spelling
someone
some one
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someone
satisfy
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satisfies
of
their work Change preposition
with
then
can enjoy a job
as they wish.Submitted by nisalnadeeshana on
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