Some people think that job satisfaction is more important than job security. Others think that people cannot expect to enjoy a job and that having a permanent job is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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world
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people
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with working conditions. Some
people
think that
job
satisfaction
is more important than
job
security others think that
people
cannot expect to enjoy a
job
and that having
a
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permanent
job
satisfaction
is always
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number one and it’s more important than
job
security. The following paragraph
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my opinion with relevant examples.
Firstly
,
job
satisfaction
always
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sense
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a sense
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of full –
filment
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filament
and pleasure for us and
satisfy
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employers are more important to the productivity of the
company
.
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, anyone in
this
word
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world
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that satisfy with their work they do their best in any situation.
Secondly
, it’s
easier
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an easier
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way to motivate us
in
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own. No need to
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motivate
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a motivater
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motivater
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motivate
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supervicer
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supervisor
to
fallow
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follow
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them to
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achieve
achive
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achieve
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their goal
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goal
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. If they are happy and
motivative
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they find
easy
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an easy
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way
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ways
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do something like
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innovator
innovation
innovater
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. For instants, “MAS”
company
monthly assume the
satisfaction
of their workers because
of
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satisfied
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employers
employees
employeers
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employees
follow
this
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life
goles
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goals
and
also
they need to
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achieve
achive
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achieve
company
goles
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goals
too.
Moreover
, they
are be
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the
advance
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company
states.
However
, some
people
imagine that
people
cannot expect to enjoy a
job
and that having a permanent
job
is more important.
For example
,
Apple
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company
owner,
he
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stopped to successful working in his friend’s
company
that
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because
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he
was not satisfy
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and
be
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a self-
emplyee
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employee
employed
in the world.
Permanent
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job
is important but we have to enjoy what we do.The
concequence
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consequence
of
unsatisfy
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unsatisfied
staff get
bad
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a bad
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impression of the
company
and effect
to
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the
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productivity too. In conclusion,
Job
satisfaction
is more important than having
permanent
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a permanent
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job
. If
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someone
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some one
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someone
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satisfy
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satisfies
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of
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their work
then
can enjoy a
job
as they wish.
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