Some people say companies should require all employees to wear uniforms at work. Others think it is unnecessary. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.

Every company have
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protocol
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wearing uniforms. For
some
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it is a requirement to wear
complete
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uniform
at
work
while other
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it is not important. In my own opinion, wearing
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makes an employee looks presentable and it is way cheaper.
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one
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hand, some companies do not
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uniform
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because of the nature of
work
. They give them an opportunity to freely express their emotions and
character
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that they want to
portrait
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.
For instance
, models who
work
in a fashion show.
This
kind of occupation requires freedom and creativity to encourage more fashion
enthusiast
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to buy unique clothing
piece
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. Limited
piece
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of clothing
are
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bit
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pricey in the market.
On the other hand
, I still believe that
uniform
helps people to look more professional and safe when facing their clients. People could easily recognize the employee in
a
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certain establishments
and
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might help them to lessen unnecessary transactions. Wearing
same
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clothes all the time
are
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economical.
For example
,
job
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from
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sales
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department , consumers could immediately differentiate the staff inside the store at
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time the more presentable the person
are
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the higher the trust and respect they can get. while people working in
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hospitals or construction
firm
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required proper protective gear for the safety In conclusion, despite
of
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modernization wearing
uniform
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at
work
is
prefer
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by most
company
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companies
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in terms of
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professionalism
profesionalism
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professionalism
and
to
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properly
identify
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its employee within the workplace. It is
more
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safer for some professions to follow the proper attire at
work
to prevent injury and exposure to certain chemicals.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • promote unity
  • sense of belonging
  • eliminate dress code issues
  • professional appearance
  • enhance the company's image
  • suppress individuality
  • personal expression
  • balanced approach
  • public interaction
  • professionalism
  • personal attire
  • without public exposure
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