Some people think that keeping pets is good for children while others think it is dangerous and unhealthy for them.

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While some people prefer to keep their
children
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at a distance from
pets
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because of health and safety reasons, others choose to do just the opposite. In
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essay, I would like to argue that
pets
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are actually good for the overall well-being of
children
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for some obvious reasons. The
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reason, of course, is that
pets
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provide
children
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with comfort and company, especially when nobody else is accompanying them. But, even when somebody is accompanying them, heir still feels a sense of comfort in the company of their treasure, mainly because those treasures are usually more “passive” and “loyal” than other humans. And
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exactly probably why, as some researchers have found, a very significant percentage of parents allow their youngsters to have
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.
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help young offspring with learning. In fact, we often can see offspring, who
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do not like to read, lying on their beds and reading to their dogs or cats and showing them pictures. The juniors even ask questions about their
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to see if they - the treasure, are actually paying enough attention to the readings.
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, the little ones actually learn important and fun things in a pleasant environment while petting their cats and dogs.
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, researchers have
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monitored that the stress level of the kids goes significantly down when they are with their
pets
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.
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, some researchers have
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found that having
pets
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can reduce a child’s risk of developing certain common allergies.
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research showed that
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, who had animals, had fewer positive skin tests for indoor allergens - like
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pet and dust-mite allergens, and
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outdoor allergens
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as ragweed and grass, compared to those juniors who did not live with
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.
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