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Some people say that in the modern world it is very difficult for people to have a healthy lifestyle. Others, however, say that it is easy for people to be healthy and fit if they want to be. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

#people #world #lifestyle
Nowadays, with the increasing varieties of
food
 and entertainment being produced,
people
 are given more opportunities to try new lives. At
this
 point, some
people
 say
say
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that
healthy
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 lifestyle is hard for
people
 to have, while others claim that being healthy and fit is still easy for them to achieve if they are willing to do. For those who consider
healthy
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 lifestyle
as
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a hard goal for modern
people
, there are several reasons to support their idea.
First
 and foremost, as I have mentioned, much more choices of
food
 and entertainment can make
people
 easier to be addicted to some bad things.
For example
, I have heard
this
 kind of news
for
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countless times: someone has
being
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 playing computer games for more than 24 hours without taking rest and died or someone
eat
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 nothing else except
for
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junk
food
 every meal and suffered from cancer in the
nor
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far future.
Second
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 because the requirement of some top university is becoming more and more difficult and countless
people
 are fighting for just entering
the
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top company like Tencent,
people
, today, are under too much pressure,
nevertheless
,
people
 are more likely to be enticed by something which can make them relax. For those who are against the ideas of the
people
 above, their idea can be supported by the following reasons.
Firstly
, though more junk
food
 and entertainment are produced, varieties of equipment in the gym and sports can provide
people
more
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 opportunities to exercise, and keep
health
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. Even simple action, like running for 10 minutes is
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a benefit
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benefit
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 to
people
’s health as long as they want to.
Secondly
, as the saying goes ‘where there is a will, there is a
way’
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, there are many stories about some
people
 who are overweight
finally
become
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 a
think
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 person through exercise, nothing is impossible if we put our heart into it, even just being healthy and fit. From my perspective, whether it is easy for
people
 to be healthy depends on their own situations. On the one hand, if the person is a worker who needs to work as long as he could to earn money, which means no time is available for him, it’s hard for him to keep healthy.
On the other hand
, if the person is a boss, rich and famous and with a lot of free time, it is possible for him to spend
couple
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 of hours exercising. In conclusion, it is hard to determine whether being healthy and fit is easy, but if
people
 try their best to exercise in
free
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 time and develop good living habits, things won’t go very worse.
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