Some people say that in the modern world it is very difficult for people to have a healthy lifestyle. Others, however, say that it is easy for people to be healthy and fit if they want to be. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, with the increasing varieties of
food
and entertainment being produced, Use synonyms
people
are given more opportunities to try new lives. At Use synonyms
this
point, some Linking Words
people
say Use synonyms
say
that Remove the redundancy
apply
healthy
lifestyle is hard for Correct article usage
a healthy
people
to have, while others claim that being healthy and fit is still easy for them to achieve if they are willing to do.
For those who consider Use synonyms
healthy
lifestyle Correct article usage
a healthy
as
a hard goal for modern Change preposition
apply
people
, there are several reasons to support their idea. Use synonyms
First
and foremost, as I have mentioned, much more choices of Linking Words
food
and entertainment can make Use synonyms
people
easier to be addicted to some bad things. Use synonyms
For example
, I have heard Linking Words
this
kind of news Linking Words
for
countless times: someone has Change preposition
apply
being
playing computer games for more than 24 hours without taking rest and died or someone Change the verb form
been
eat
nothing else except Change the verb form
eats
for
junk Change preposition
apply
food
every meal and suffered from cancer in the Use synonyms
nor
far future. Correct word choice
apply
Linking Words
Second
because the requirement of some top university is becoming more and more difficult and countless Add a comma
,Second
people
are fighting for just entering Use synonyms
the
top company like Tencent, Correct article usage
apply
people
, today, are under too much pressure, Use synonyms
nevertheless
, Linking Words
people
are more likely to be enticed by something which can make them relax.
For those who are against the ideas of the Use synonyms
people
above, their idea can be supported by the following reasons. Use synonyms
Firstly
, though more junk Linking Words
food
and entertainment are produced, varieties of equipment in the gym and sports can provide Use synonyms
people
Use synonyms
more
opportunities to exercise, and keep Change preposition
with more
health
. Even simple action, like running for 10 minutes is Replace the word
healthy
Add an article
a benefit
the benefit
benefit
to Replace the word
beneficial
people
’s health as long as they want to. Use synonyms
Secondly
, as the saying goes ‘where there is a will, there is a Linking Words
way’
, there are many stories about some Correct your spelling
way
people
who are overweight Use synonyms
finally
Linking Words
become
a Wrong verb form
becoming
think
person through exercise, nothing is impossible if we put our heart into it, even just being healthy and fit.
From my perspective, whether it is easy for Change the verb form
thinking
people
to be healthy depends on their own situations. On the one hand, if the person is a worker who needs to work as long as he could to earn money, which means no time is available for him, it’s hard for him to keep healthy. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, if the person is a boss, rich and famous and with a lot of free time, it is possible for him to spend Linking Words
couple
of hours exercising.
In conclusion, it is hard to determine whether being healthy and fit is easy, but if Change the article
a couple
people
try their best to exercise in Use synonyms
free
time and develop good living habits, things won’t go very worse.Correct pronoun usage
their free
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