Today food travel thousand of mile from farmers to consumers. Why is it so? It is a positive or negative development?

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50 years ago,the process of farming was changed and as a consequence,these changes affected our life. One of these changes is uncultivated land which was useful in the past but not yet.
Thus
in my belief,I would contend that for providing our crucial needs,we have to
import
and export
foods
throughout the world. It is an undeniable fact that
such
issues as global warming and new weather pattern altered the
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of rainfalls as well as snowfalls.
Thus
, in recent years, we have
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environmental problems like drought and starvation-which latter is one of the impacts of the former.
Therefore
, the number of parched deserts-
for instance
Sub Saharan Africa- is expanding in the world. For mentioned reasons,all countries or town can not provide their vital
foods
and need to
import
their meals. In my
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I sincerely argue that
this
process has its benefits.
For example
,China is a populated country but
also
has favourable weather. Chinese farmers need to export their excess commodities to make money ;and other countries like Iran,for the sake of drought,need to
import
some of its crucial
foods
like rice. Cultivating rice needs extremely vast sources of water or a huge amount of rainfall which are not accessible recently.In
this
way,China can make money and Iran can provide
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crucial commodity. Another con of
this
trend is in favour of cultural issues. Food and recipes are an important part of the culture of a society. When countries export and
import
their special
foods
,they can be familiar with the spices and meals of others. Another salient example
,
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is
noodle
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. Noodle is for Korea but lots of Iranians are interested in
this
snack. So when noodles are imported to Iran,Iranian can enjoy that. By way of conclusion,I once again reaffirm my position that exporting and importing
foods
,nowadays,is a beneficial matter for the sake of drought or making money.
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