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Some people enjoy change and they look forward to new experiences. Others like their lives to stay the same, and they do not change their usual habits. Compare these two approaches to life. Which approach do you prefer? Explain why.

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All individuals typically have their own methods to build their
life
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facing problems that may occur during their lives. Some of them look at their
life
 like a game which must be won. The others just prefer to spend days in peace with
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 to their regular habits. In
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 my opinion will be stated after comparing these two points of view. The
people
 who look forward to changes are not satisfied with what they have. They believe in fighting with problems rather than accepting them. They have enough confidence in facing difficulties constantly. Stepping forward in order to reach their immense goals is one side of their strong character. Should they get over an obstacle, they will be more assertive to get closer to their aims.
This
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 in the biographies of many successful well-known
people
 like Steve Jobs.
On the other hand
, there are some
people
 who are extremely powerful in enduring problems as they are not strong enough to solve them. Not only do they not relish
for
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having new experiences, but
also
 they run away if
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something new is going to alter their routines. A calm
life
 far from any turbulent is what they
favor
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 to go with in comparison with the
first
 type of
people
. The latter have tremendous dreams which must come true. According to my essay, I prefer the
first
 group of
people
although
 they perhaps experience hard moments in their
life
, they would be the winner
finally
.
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