You recently spent a weekend with your friend in her/his new house. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should: explain what you like about his new house tell what you enjoyed most during your staying suggest when and where you could meet next time with her/him.

Dear Alice. I hope you are doing well.
First
of
all
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thank you for calling me to your new
house warming
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housewarming
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party. I must say it is amazing and I enjoyed my weekend over there. Your house is far away from
city's
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the city's
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hustle and
that
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apply
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I really
liked
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itliked
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. All of your family members are so humble, especially, your
grand-mother
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I loved her stories. I liked the food cooked by your mother, it was so delicious.
Overall
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party
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was perfect and I think all of our friends enjoyed
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our stay
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stay
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at your house. Looking forward to seeing you. All the best. Regards, Shikha
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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