In many parts of the world today there is a profitable market for products which lighten or whiten people’s skin. Outline the reasons for using such products and discuss what effect they have in terms of health on society?

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Fashion
is a
part
of
life
. It depends on how you look into it. As per my understanding,
life
and
fashion
are
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inseparable
inseperable
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inseparable
. Our daily activities contain
fashion
or trends, with or without our own awareness. The clothes, accessories, lifestyles,
how
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and how
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you present yourself in front of your friends and families are
also
considered
as
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fashion
. Some
takes
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extreme measure to study and indulge
into
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it whereas, some people think it
just
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is just
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a
part
of
life
that doesn't need any attention.
Fashion
is
culture
. Every
part
of the world has
their
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own
culture
.
Culture
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folk trends of
east
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is
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different
than
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western
culture
folks. The inner
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personality
personnality
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personality
of a person can
also
impact
the
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fashion
. So it is considered as an art by some person who is aware of
the
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it.
For instance
, the clothing and accessories followed by different parts of India cannot be compared to
different
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a different
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part
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parts
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of the world. It has its own
unquieness
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uniqueness
and identity in every way.
Fashion
can
also
represent the growth of a
country
and its people. It shows the
country
's economic, social and individual
factor
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factors
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.
For example
, the city with
latest
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or advanced trends can come up with many industries which will be beneficial to
the
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their
citizens
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citizen's
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workforce. If the
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workforce
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work force
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is increased, the development and
earning
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earnings
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of the
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individual
indiviual
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individual
is
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are
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raised.
Thus
leading to
development
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the development
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of
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the city
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city
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cities
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and
country
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countries
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.
Fashion
can
also
impact
the
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nature. The leather, that we use for accessories like shoes and belt comes from animals. The clothes, that we use comes from wool or tree.
Thus
impacting
the
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nature. Many people
takes
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this
as a concern and study them to improve our lifestyle. To summarise,
the
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fashion
is a
part
of
culture
and art. It needs to be studied
,
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so that the lifestyle and daily
life
can be improved,
thus
the growth of
country
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the country
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and world can be enhanced.
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