Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. What are theadvantages and disadvantages for the child having a large number of toys?

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buys their

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a large number of

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for them to play with. There are some immediate advantages appearing but almost everything

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its own

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. Both the advantages and disadvantages will be discussed in

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essay. Buying a large

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of things

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can play with has its bright side. The

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and most common benefit

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could gain from doing

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is keeping their

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so that they do not

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them while they are doing their work. Majority of

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who buy their

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lots of

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are usually busy with work so they appreciate every minute they can get. But they

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do not want to leave their

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with nothing to do while they are at work. In order to achieve

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, they spent a great sum of money to buy

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toys

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that they could spend time with

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of spending time with their

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benefit

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benefit

working adults, but it could

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help with the development of a child's creativity.

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, on the

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there are a significant number of

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that encourage

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to think without stressing them out

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cubes, lego sets, jigsaws, and more.

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, buying

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many

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be a double-edged sword. Spending time with their

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all day between four walls,

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will not feel the need to go out to play with friends.

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could possibly result in a negative effect

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' social development. Another problem

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be mentioned is that

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children

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get less and less entertained by

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, they do not appreciate

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like they used to.

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making the

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decrease in their use value. With these consequences that can not be ignored,

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need to take

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consideration whether they should or should not buy their

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that

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. As a rule of thumb, anything and everything needs to be kept in moderation, including the

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of

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given to a child. In conclusion, spending money on

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to give to

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have its

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benefits

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benefits

. But those benefits simply cannot outweigh the remarkable downsides that it brings.

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making

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decision almost unconsiderable.