Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. What are theadvantages and disadvantages for the child having a large number of toys?

A small portion of

parents

buys their

children

a large number of

toys

for them to play with. There are some immediate advantages appearing but almost everything

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its own

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down sides

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. Both the advantages and disadvantages will be discussed in

this

essay. Buying a large

amount

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of things

children

can play with has its bright side. The

first

and most common benefit

parents

could gain from doing

this

is keeping their

kids

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so that they do not

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disturb

them while they are doing their work. Majority of

parents

who buy their

children

lots of

toys

are usually busy with work so they appreciate every minute they can get. But they

also

do not want to leave their

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do not want to leave their kids with anything

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kids

with nothing to do while they are at work. In order to achieve

this

, they spent a great sum of money to buy

children

toys

that they could spend time with

instead

of spending time with their

parents

. Not only did

this

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benefit

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benefit

working adults, but it could

also

help with the development of a child's creativity.

For instance

, on the

market

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there are a significant number of

toys

that encourage

kids

to think without stressing them out

such

as

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rubik

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cubes, lego sets, jigsaws, and more.

However

, buying

kids

many

toys

can

also

be a double-edged sword. Spending time with their

toys

all day between four walls,

children

will not feel the need to go out to play with friends.

This

could possibly result in a negative effect

in

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kids

' social development. Another problem

can

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be mentioned is that

overtime

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children

get less and less entertained by

toys

, they do not appreciate

toys

like they used to.

Thus

making the

toys

decrease in their use value. With these consequences that can not be ignored,

parents

need to take

in

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consideration whether they should or should not buy their

kids

that

much

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many

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toys

. As a rule of thumb, anything and everything needs to be kept in moderation, including the

amount

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number

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of

toys

given to a child. In conclusion, spending money on

toys

to give to

child

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the child

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have its

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benefits

benifits

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benefits

. But those benefits simply cannot outweigh the remarkable downsides that it brings.

Therefore

making

this

decision almost unconsiderable.