In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Due to
the
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technological advancement, it
is now consider
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that printed
media
like magazines, newspapers and books will no longer be sold due to the fact of being easily available on
internet
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without any charges.
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essay
agree
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with the fact, in
this
fast-paced society, digital
media
is now replacing print
media
and in
near
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future people will prefer online newspapers and books over hard version.
This
is because it is more convenient and efficient and
secondly
it is free of cost. I will discuss both my views with
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. In
this
modern world, where society
rely
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on smartphones and laptops more, usage of these gadgets increases to save time and energy.
In
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just one- click any piece of information is on your
mobiles
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,
this
is the main reason
of
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obsolescence
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of print
media
.
For instance
, big channels like BBC
News
, or CNN,
also
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their websites with daily
news
which can
be easily search
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and read in less time.
Secondly
, there are small population still willing to buy printed books and
news
reports, but these online resources are available without any subscription
and
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charges. There are many open websites showing different categories of information,
news
and current affairs without any fees
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example,
the
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daily
news
.com or dawn.com and many other websites In conclusion,
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thats
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being said
which
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is true that with time all the printed
version
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of
media
will
be disappear
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and digital
media
will revolve around the globe because
its
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free of cost and can easily be searched on
internet
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the internet
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.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

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  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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