Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for trourists who visit such places?
Some
people
argue that travelling in places
like Sahara
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the Sahara
deserts
or Fix the agreement mistake
Desert
Antarctic
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the Antarctic
have
lots of benefits Change the verb form
has
such
as learning to appreciate human development also
, getting to know our planet and nature from Correct word choice
and also
different
perspective. Add an article
a different
However
, other people
strongly believe that visits to such
places
can be dangerous and can have lethal outcomes if travelers
are not well prepared and trained properly.
It is certain, that getting out of Change the spelling
travellers
comfort
zone and going to Correct pronoun usage
my comfort
places
where conditions are not human friendly
for living, could teach one to appreciate their current living conditions and not take human development for granted. Because Add a hyphen
human-friendly
majority
of Add an article
the majority
people
live in the
developed cities and never even think about famine, hunger, cold, heat, or being attacked by wild creatures. Correct article usage
apply
For example
, researchers collected surveys from hundreds of travel agencies where these kinds of visits were organized. And were shocked that majority
of clients mentioned that they are happy to be back to civilization and they are thankful that science and human development make Correct article usage
the majority
people
's lives much easier.
On the other hand
, there are lots of dangers that await travelers
on Change the spelling
travellers
this
kind of trips
. Fix the agreement mistake
trip
For example
, it is a known fact that Sahara is full of wild species which could bite, poison or even attack people
. Apart from that, there is weather
condition that can make the overall experience pretty Add an article
a weather
Add a hyphen
life-endangering
life endangering
as well. And of course, Add a hyphen
life-endangering
Antarctic's
cold freezing climate can contribute Correct article usage
the Antarctic's
for
Change preposition
to
frost bites
and all Correct your spelling
frostbites
sort
of sicknesses if not prepared appropriately. Fix the agreement mistake
sorts
For example
, all the expeditions and trips to Antarctic
always have a victim of Correct article usage
the Antarctic
a
Correct article usage
apply
frost bite
which certainly is not the Correct your spelling
frostbite
best desired
outcome from the travelling.
In summary, there are numerous benefits of visiting Add a hyphen
best-desired
such
places
, however
, we always need to keep in mind that there are hidden dangers which could endanger our lives if we are not well trained
and prepared for those travel activities.Add a hyphen
well-trained
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