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HIghlight features and compare the modes of transport at Europen Union.

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The chart shows CO2
emissions
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 per
passenger
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kilometre
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 for various methods of
transport
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 in the European Union while the pie chart shows European Union spending on
transport
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. Flying by air produces by far the greatest CO2
emissions
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, approximately three times as much as
passenger
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 cars which are the
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 largest producers. Very little is spent by the
EU
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 on air travel while roads make up more than half of the
EU
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transport
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 budget. Trains produce about three times less CO2
emissions
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 per
passenger
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kilometre
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 than
passenger
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 cars and eight times less than air travel. Nearly a
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 of
EU
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transport
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 funds are spent on railways. Ships are a clean form of
transport
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 and produce about the same amount of CO2 per
passenger
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kilometre
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 as trains do.
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, only 2
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 of
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 funds are spent on ports. A
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 one
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 is spent on inland waterways. Coaches are the cleanest form of
transport
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.
Emissions
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 of CO2 per
passenger
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kilometre
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 from coaches are half those of buses. Buses emit less than half as much CO2 per
passenger
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kilometre
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 as cars. The European Union spends 10
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 of its
transport
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 budget on public
transport
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,
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 as buses and coaches.
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