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The chart shows CO2
emissions
per
passenger
kilometre
for various methods of
transport
in the European Union while the pie chart shows European Union spending on
transport
. Flying by air produces by far the greatest CO2
emissions
, approximately three times as much as
passenger
cars which are the
next
largest producers. Very little is spent by the
EU
on air travel while roads make up more than half of the
EU
transport
budget. Trains produce about three times less CO2
emissions
per
passenger
kilometre
than
passenger
cars and eight times less than air travel. Nearly a
third
of
EU
transport
funds are spent on railways. Ships are a clean form of
transport
and produce about the same amount of CO2 per
passenger
kilometre
as trains do.
However
, only 2
percent
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per cent
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of
EU
funds are spent on ports. A
further
one
percent
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is spent on inland waterways. Coaches are the cleanest form of
transport
.
Emissions
of CO2 per
passenger
kilometre
from coaches are half those of buses. Buses emit less than half as much CO2 per
passenger
kilometre
as cars. The European Union spends 10
percent
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per cent
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of its
transport
budget on public
transport
,
such
as buses and coaches.
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