More and more young people from wealthy countries are spending time in communities in younger countries doing unpaid jobs such as teaching or building. Why is this? Who benefits from this, the community or these young people.

It is becoming popular that youths from rich nations
live
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within the community and render voluntary
services
in those
communities
. I believe
this
is happening because of more awareness of the needs of the community and the young
people
gain more
skills
from
this
experience.
To begin
with, the increased enlightenment of the uneven distribution of wealth and resources to poorer
communities
is one major reason why
this
is happening.
In other words
, young adults from richer countries are beginning to see that there are other places where their residents lack basic amenities and with
that
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,that
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they may develop some interest in helping them by rendering voluntary
services
.
For example
, there are advertisements on television about some villages where drinking water is unavailable.
In addition
, a young boy or girl who watches
this
might develop some interest in going to that area to help in constructing potable drinking sources. These volunteer
services
is
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are
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of more benefit to
the
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apply
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young
people
as they gain valuable
skills
from
this
exposure.
This
means that the series of actions that the volunteer
services
involve
help
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helping
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young
people
garner experiences that will help them in their workplace after graduation.
For instance
, the
skills
of teamwork and leadership can be acquired from teaching as volunteers within smaller
communities
.
Furthermore
, these
skills
can be used in adulthood
on
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in
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their paid jobs. In conclusion, many young
people
are moving to smaller
communities
to render unpaid
services
because there is more publicity on the lack of basic amenities in these
communities
. These
services
are more beneficial to young
people
because they transfer the
skills
gained from rendering community
services
to their professional jobs later in life.
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